Monday, August 13, 2012

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The person in the picture a ten years old boy, he is from Saudi Arabia.  After getting up from his bed and start getting ready to dress up for school. While he is getting ready, his mother starts preparing his breakfast. As soon as he finishes school, he goes to play saucer with his friends. Once the boy and his friend start playing, they will play until the sunset. While playing the rain started to fall. The rain terns the play ground to a muddy aria for boys to play. The boys start to play with the mud instead of their soccer ball, because the ground had become hard for them to be able to pass the ball to etch other. Even though the rain still falling the boys still playing with muddy balls, it is more fun then playing with a saucer balls. While playing with the muddy balls, the boys started to have a fight with them. Since fighting is not acceptable, one of the boys called the boys fathers. By the time their fathers arrived they stopped fighting.  After talking to their fathers, the boys made an agreement that they will stop fighting with the muddy balls and they all go home that what their fathers ordered them all to do whether they finish playing or not, and they all go home and get ready to bed.

1 comment:

  1. Your story has a sad ending, haha! I didn't want the boys to get in trouble for having fun! :(
    Nice job with the grammar, but still lots of spelling mistakes that make it hard to understand!
    8/10

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