The person in the picture a ten
years old boy, he is from Saudi Arabia.
After getting up from his bed and start getting ready to dress up for
school. While he is getting ready, his mother starts preparing his breakfast.
As soon as he finishes school, he goes to play saucer with his friends. Once the
boy and his friend start playing, they will play until the sunset. While
playing the rain started to fall. The rain terns the play ground to a muddy
aria for boys to play. The boys start to play with the mud instead of their
soccer ball, because the ground had become hard for them to be able to pass the
ball to etch other. Even though the rain still falling the boys still playing with
muddy balls, it is more fun then playing with a saucer balls. While playing
with the muddy balls, the boys started to have a fight with them. Since
fighting is not acceptable, one of the boys called the boys fathers. By the
time their fathers arrived they stopped fighting. After talking to their fathers,
the boys made an agreement that they will stop fighting with the muddy balls
and they all go home that what their fathers ordered them all to do whether
they finish playing or not, and they all go home and get ready to bed.
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Your story has a sad ending, haha! I didn't want the boys to get in trouble for having fun! :(
ReplyDeleteNice job with the grammar, but still lots of spelling mistakes that make it hard to understand!
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